LEARN;
- To use a correct sentence.
- To use interesting vocabulary
- My ideas are interesting.
One day in 1918 there was war,But not yet it was still 10 weeks until war would come. On the 3rd week one man called Tim was going to miss his dad because his dad was going to war!Tim decided that some way he would stop this but how if he was not the government?Tim thought and thought and thought but he did not have an idea!! I told myself not to panic at all.Suddenly I heard someone knock on the steaming door.I rushed to the door with excitement.The person was holding a note with my name on it and including some clothes, then I released that I was going to war! I panicked and shivered with tear.I couldn't barely take a breath, I took an Enormous breath and took the note and clothes .The man told me to get my luggage and get into his car. Tim got to the place where all the people where training for war.I jumped out of the car and took my luggage and started training for the big scary day.At last it was the big day I was not as scared as I was the beginning.I was trained well I was ready and fighted my enemies strongly.The day had finished and I survived my worst life time.When I got home I was about to open the door but a guy put his hand on my left shoulder.who is that I asked and turned around and sore a guy with a sad look on him he told me that my dad died in the war. There was silent when I bears-ted in tear I cried and cried.The next day in the night I drove to the cemetery and sat on the chair with a flower in my hand.
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